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Wanders of the mind. Skylight. Blue water.
Escaping my clutch,
Touching my fingers for a simple moment
and disappearing just as fast.

Nothing stays, nothing is mine.

But as you rip my soul to half,
and take me inside,
Hope flies, and thoughts surprise
Hours spent, figuring it out
Why? The sick pleasure caresses
the once heaven-blessed child.

Your wants. They coax my needs.
Keep me alive, as my body feels weak.
Slipping down to my dusted feet -

I see stars dying to fly
From the chains tangled up in the sky
And my feet stand on
A slushy ground of complicated lies.

The sweat on your brows;
they touch on my skin
as I come to you,
and show you what I mean.

Taking in breaths so deep,
Taking what's rightfully mine to keep
and giving what it takes to
Run away from the outside
away from the sight of life
that ceases to satisfy me.

Giving what it takes for you
to love me again,
Wild, dizzy, and
Ripped.
©2005-2009 `nosugarjustanger
:iconnosugarjustanger:

Author's Comments

while waiting for the sleepiness to come, i wrote a simple poem. i think it happened before, but the past turned to dust and all that's left is just this and a couple more things to ponder about.

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:iconquickdraw:
I suck at critiquing poetry, in fact I suck at reading it.

But I liked this one, I think. See, that is how retarded I am at it.

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When you've got nothing to lose, then baby you've got it all.
:iconsaouif:
my english still bad... ^^; but, according to some parts I can translate I can imagine some points.... perhaps something with love n sex (^^;).... still nice.... if only my English is good, perhaps I'll see the real mean....

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my body slowly stopped making pulses.
Blood vessels became a single tube.
Blood disappeared like vapor.
Heart and everything became sculptures that only have a shape.
See, that's why it will no longer hurt
-kohaku of Tsukihime-
:iconnosugarjustanger:
it's okay, but i guess it's something to do with sex and.. needs. =p

:cuddle: thanks for the comment!

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Fueled by :beer: :beer: :beer:.
:iconnosugarjustanger:
Coming from you, it's quite a sweet compliment.

:) Much appreciated.

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Fueled by :beer: :beer: :beer:.
:iconsaouif:
^^; ooppsss.... no love involved??

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my body slowly stopped making pulses.
Blood vessels became a single tube.
Blood disappeared like vapor.
Heart and everything became sculptures that only have a shape.
See, that's why it will no longer hurt
-kohaku of Tsukihime-
:iconnosugarjustanger:
It's more like a lust mistaken as love.

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Fueled by :beer: :beer: :beer:.
:iconsaouif:
aaa..... so, the need of sex that wrong translated to love?? yeah, that kind of thing happen nowadays....

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my body slowly stopped making pulses.
Blood vessels became a single tube.
Blood disappeared like vapor.
Heart and everything became sculptures that only have a shape.
See, that's why it will no longer hurt
-kohaku of Tsukihime-
:iconnosugarjustanger:
nah, it's just the needs taking over your conscience. I don't know - it happened but.. ok, let's just put it this way - lust is not love, but love can developed from lust.

:faint: I am lost.

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Fueled by :beer: :beer: :beer:.
:iconsaouif:
yeah... :nod:agree with u!!!

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my body slowly stopped making pulses.
Blood vessels became a single tube.
Blood disappeared like vapor.
Heart and everything became sculptures that only have a shape.
See, that's why it will no longer hurt
-kohaku of Tsukihime-
:iconquickdraw:
Meh ... don't let anyone else know. It could ruin my reputation of being an asshole around here.

:heart:

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When you've got nothing to lose, then baby you've got it all.

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