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^ Girl, can you run fast?
* You may I think I can, but I can't.
^ What if I tell you that it's a must?
* Bollocks, it's only the thrill that you want.

^ The thrill of what?
* The thrill of the bounce, you fool.

^ Who are you to jump into conclusion?
* Why am I not given an option?
^ You demand too much from myself
* But baby, I don't wanna be left on the shelf
^ I assure you won't be alone all your life
* I know, but I can't picture myself as your wife
^ Don't like the taste of becoming dependent?
* No, I just don't like the anticipation
^ For who?
* For you?
^ So what are you doing to do?
* What I'm doing now.
^ Stop being a bitch.
* Stop being a leech.

^Okay, okay, don't be mean.
* But I can't help it, I just want you to come clean.
^You know about me inside and out.
* No I don't, I don't know what you're all about.
^ What's my favourite color?
* Blue, like duh.
^ What's my natural hair color?
* Brown, like earth.
^What's my biggest possession?
* I am not entitled to answer.
^ Answer me.
* Your .... little brother? (insert a cheeky laugh)
^ Whatever.
* You asked for an answer!
^ Don't be such a pervert.
* I was just being a ...
^ Loss for words?
* Shut up, you nerd.
^ Loser!

* Where are we going later?
^ We're going to have dinner.
^ Let's have pizza and beer.
* You drink far too much.
^ You deprive yourself of happiness and such.
* Beer equates to happiness?
^ Yes, sometimes I wish you would not be so curious.
* Can't I ask questions?
^ You can, as long as I still have my patience.
* Aaw, I love you.
^ You too, poo.

* Ass.
^ Pants.
* Dinner.
^ Later.
* Kiss me.
^ Now.
^ Me.

* Meow.
* Here I come.
©2005-2009 `nosugarjustanger
:iconnosugarjustanger:

Author's Comments

Its meant to be light-hearted.
What is said to be an attempt to talk in poetry... did we pass, or fail. hmm.

^ = James
* = Me

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:iconatrocity-of-life:
Aw, I love it! And it'd be so much fun to do that, too. It's very confusing, and ought to read it over again to understand it but I simply don't have the patience. Or the oppisite. I simply have too much patience and I don't want to go over it again and again and lose a lot of time to myself.

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Bass Fingers.
:iconpingu303:
Great image.

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:iconnosugarjustanger:
Grr. Mean you :'( =p

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Fueled by :beer: :beer: :beer:.
:iconjenishi-kumiko:
*laughing* Very cute in a funny sort of way....
:iconskoldy54:
^^ very cute. i think it works
:iconatrocity-of-life:
oh, sorry, I inadvertantly complimented it!!

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Bass Fingers.
:iconlovemeknot:
i like it. I just got hung up on this line:
* But baby, I don't wanna be left in the shelf -- only because I think it would flow nicer if you say "on" the shelf.
It's very playful. I'd say you passed. Kinda makes me wanna try it out too :thumbsup:

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"Be kind, for everyone we meet is facing a great struggle"
--Philo of Alexandria--
:iconlostacidjoker:
interesting style. I think you did very well on it, especially in the boldness to try such a rare style of poetry. Very well done!!

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Please check out my work too as I have checked yours.
:nirvana: "It is better to be hated for what you are, then loved for what you are not."- Kurt Cobain

>Details have ruined my life and made me a perfectionist<

I am ADHD, SO sue me!
:iconxyan:
Heehee, I know your name now :giggle:

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I need to think of a witty signature for dA... But it has to be really, really stupid.
What about the link to your gallery?
...Yeah, "that'll do"
:iconc-wagner:
Wow thats really good it really worked.

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I'm not patronising i'm a philosopher. - Me

I argue not to win, but to see my weaknesses

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