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I just recollected back all the things some of my girlfriends told me about their experiences..so I wrote about it and it included mine as well, but I guess people know which is mine. Anyway, as you all have noticed, my style of writing is somewhat, WTF? Because I always unintentionally joke around and stuff, but it was just meant to give it my 'character' you know. Well, yep. It's not as good as "Your Body My Body The Sheets" but maybe it'd be 'readable'.

Bless you guys with happiness and fulfilled dreams.
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speshul Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2004
i can 'amost' feel the pain.
it is awesome.
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nosugarjustanger Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2004
yep..thanks.. that is good enough for me..
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Fool-On-The-Hill Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
wow, this is so, so gut wrenching. The power and emotion is amazing... brilliant.
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nosugarjustanger Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
Hey thanks.. u guess what, there was a thread for the most talented DArtist and I wrote that it was you, and then he responded to my reply and said he liked "Hold On" too.. so yeah, ur great..and he APPROVED of you being the most talented poet... well, you see, ;) I just soo rock, but you rock harder!
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Fool-On-The-Hill Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
really?! wow! thankyou guys so much! I really am NOT the most talented on here, just take a look at someone like DesignerFreak! who were you talking to?

BUT THANKYOU! :hug:
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nosugarjustanger Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
zamfir. thats his username.

of course you might not be the most talented around.. but at least one of those to me, with the other heavyweights like xyan, xpyrox, heaven-rose.. i think each of us is special.. only some gets the exposure..im glad you get a nice comment from him :) at least he told that to me and i told it to you! :) i have not checked designer freak..but hey, i only like poetry more than any other art so.. ;)
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Fool-On-The-Hill Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
DesignerFreak writes amazing poetry as well! plus, she's a damn good friend of mine outside DA. I don't think anyone is better than anyone else on here, just different. Glad some people like my stuff though!
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nosugarjustanger Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
ahh cool :D i go check her out!
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Fool-On-The-Hill Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
good good lol!
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Xyan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004
Wow... This is a great piece... I say that because I'm shocked - I haven't had an experience like that, and yet it was written so well it feels like I have. You're a great writer! ^^
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nosugarjustanger Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004
You can't be right... you're such an awesome writer..when I read your parts of the short stories (ahh, my bad...have not finished yet!) you have amazing way of writing.. u know..the details.. you cant really see me writing about people with tails and etc.. :(

U telling me that im amazing is something absurd.. :blushes: but :hug: to you... would you believe me if I say, if I have a boy kid, Im naming him Xyan. Hopefully he will be a great person, and a great writer like you :) bless!
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Xyan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004
Oh, but I am right! You're very descriptive whether or not you may think so. As for the whole fantasy bit - Lets just say my imagination is on crack XD I'll look at next to anything and wonder something like "Just a few blades, and that would be so cool..." or "I could so see 4 feathery wings pokin' out of that things back... Oooo! New character idea! =3" in my head XD

:hug: You're work is amazing though ^^ And as for the naming a kid Xyan - You can, but I wanna see him one day XD We should give him a tail! lol, don't worry - I won't mutate your kid... today =D
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nosugarjustanger Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004
That'd be cool.. u'll be his godfather. Like, I'll name him Xyan Chris ____. Cool.. unless my hubby knows about you, so you gotta hush! :) Chris is a GREAT name, not to mention sexy. ;)
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Xyan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004
Oh yes, Rawr indeed XD I bet your hubby would be like "...Xyan..?...O_o;;;" though - I've had tons of people go "Duuuude... what the hell!" and then the classic "Look over there! It's an Oompa Loompa gonna bite Mike Tyson's ear off in revenge for getting him addicted to acid!" and then running really fast XD I love getting nowhere really, really fast.
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nosugarjustanger Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004
i dont care about his 0.o.. my son has to be a Xyan, a Josh, a Xander. I want more sons than daughters. If I'm feeling lucky, I want 5 kids! :) More love from momma! :heart:
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Xyan Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
And it's not like the guy will complain? XD And you should live on a farm and have Cows! I love cows X3 And then your kids could work, and poke the animals with sticks! That would be living the Human dream... XD
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nosugarjustanger Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
No no.. no cow poking for my kids! I want them to be great animal lovers... bonus if they are cats.. meoowww.. cats are marvellousss. when i am old and cranky, i will surround myself with cats.. ;)
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XpyroX Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004   Writer
thats really depressing..but somehow i like it, does that make me weird? ...well anyway it was a great story
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XpyroX Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004   Writer
yeah well it did make me think
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nosugarjustanger Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2004
thank you.. :)its a little too short, but it's just to let people ponder on their lives too.. thanks guy :)
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