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Something quite non-fictional.
Something experimental.
Something someone has gone through... and still haunts him.
Something I know of him, that makes himself a special somebody...
But I'm only one of those who builds dreams
That are more likely to tumble.
Preview pic taken from [link]
Thanks to
I took about an hour to do this... and it's not that long a period of time...
No reference to dictionary or anything... I don't want it polished, i want it to be selfishly mine.
Would probably dedicate this to Aidan who would be celebrating his birthday.. in time to come
Something experimental.
Something someone has gone through... and still haunts him.
Something I know of him, that makes himself a special somebody...
But I'm only one of those who builds dreams
That are more likely to tumble.
Preview pic taken from [link]
Thanks to
I took about an hour to do this... and it's not that long a period of time...
No reference to dictionary or anything... I don't want it polished, i want it to be selfishly mine.
Would probably dedicate this to Aidan who would be celebrating his birthday.. in time to come
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Excellent ending very strong.
I like the casual narration. It feels very personal. Like your friend is telling you a story... which lets you sorta relax and get into it.
Some of the rhyming is really good and some of it breaks the flow a little, but most of it is good.
The lines in parentheses really add to it as well. Focal points almost summarizing the poem.
Anyway, nice work
I like the casual narration. It feels very personal. Like your friend is telling you a story... which lets you sorta relax and get into it.
Some of the rhyming is really good and some of it breaks the flow a little, but most of it is good.
The lines in parentheses really add to it as well. Focal points almost summarizing the poem.
Anyway, nice work