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Matron of the Golden Grain by Scarecrowlover

I like that the color scheme is simple and easy on the eyes. The pouty, slightly parted lips gives her the seductive look. Her eyes are very pretty as well!

However, I think that she could be adorned in more jewelry and more elaborated make-up... since she's after all the madame of the best brothel in town. She looks like the girl working at the brothel rather than running it. A little bit of flamboyance wouldn't hurt. ;)

The fingers of the hand on her hip seems rather odd. Just like claws. But then again, I'm being nitpicky. It's a critique, after all.

Overall, I think you did a great job. I like the fact that she's a little pudgy - different from the typical tweedy-looking madames usually depicted in the media.
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Scarecrowlover Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
You've given me some wonderful advice. More jewelry. Yes! That is what she's missing. You have a point. I do need to make her look a bit more of a boss than a worker.
Haha tell me about it, I am a tragedy when it comes to doing fingers. I will try to improve my skills.
I'm glad you appreciated her pudginess ^^ I find her so endearing!
nosugarjustanger Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
Heh, I can't draw for nuts so I admire people who can at least draw well. I'm sure with enough practice, you'll get better. :lol:
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