I like that the color scheme is simple and easy on the eyes. The pouty, slightly parted lips gives her the seductive look. Her eyes are very pretty as well!
However, I think that she could be adorned in more jewelry and more elaborated make-up... since she's after all the madame of the best brothel in town. She looks like the girl working at the brothel rather than running it. A little bit of flamboyance wouldn't hurt.
The fingers of the hand on her hip seems rather odd. Just like claws. But then again, I'm being nitpicky. It's a critique, after all.
Overall, I think you did a great job. I like the fact that she's a little pudgy - different from the typical tweedy-looking madames usually depicted in the media.
Thank you so much!
You've given me some wonderful advice. More jewelry. Yes! That is what she's missing. You have a point. I do need to make her look a bit more of a boss than a worker.
Haha tell me about it, I am a tragedy when it comes to doing fingers. I will try to improve my skills.
I'm glad you appreciated her pudginess ^^ I find her so endearing!